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		<title>King, Stephen -- On Writing, ch. 12 (2000)</title>
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		<dc:creator>Dave</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Mostly, when I think of pacing, I go back to Elmore Leonard, who explained it so perfectly by saying he just left out the boring parts. This suggests cutting to speed the pace, and that&#8217;s what most of us end up having to do (kill your darlings, kill your darlings, even when it breaks your [&#8230;]]]></description>
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			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mostly, when I think of pacing, I go back to Elmore Leonard, who explained it so perfectly by saying he just left out the boring parts. This suggests cutting to speed the pace, and that&#8217;s what most of us end up having to do (kill your darlings, kill your darlings, even when it breaks your egocentric little scribbler&#8217;s heart, kill your darlings).</p>
<br><b>Stephen King</b> (b. 1947) American author<br><i>On Writing</i>, ch. 12 (2000) 
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See <a href="https://wist.info/leonard-elmore/23689/">Leonard</a> and <a href="https://wist.info/quiller-couch-arthur/23753/">Quiller-Couch</a>.						</span>
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